Hey, there! Carol Tanzman checking in!
This week’s post
was inspired by Brain Pickings, a site for and about creativity.
As writers going
about the business of writing, many of them have created their own “rules.” Of course, all rules are made to be
broken, but some of these may be helpful to you. They may be new – or they may
be things you know but need to be reminded about. I've gathered these great tips in one list! Which are the
ones you agree with – which are the ones you disagree with? It’s a smorgasbord
of things to think about either way!
Elmore Leonard –
10 Rules of Writing
1.
Never open a book with the weather.
2.
Avoid prologues.
3.
Never use a verb other than “said” to carry
dialogue.
4.
Never use an adverb to modify the verb “said.”
5.
Keep your exclamation points under control!
6.
Never use the words “suddenly” or “all hell
broke loose.”
7.
Use regional dialect, patois, sparingly.
8.
Avoid detailed descriptions of characters.
9.
Same for places and things.
10. Leave out the
parts readers tend to skip.
Zadie Smith – 8 Rules of Writing
1.
When still a child, make sure you read a lot of
books. Spend more time doing this than anything else.
2.
When an adult, try to read your own work as a
stranger would read it, or even better, as an enemy would.
3.
Don’t romanticise your ‘vocation’. You can
either write good sentences or you can’t. There is no ‘writer’s lifestyle’. All
that matters is what you leave on the page.
4.
Avoid your weaknesses. But do this without
telling yourself that the things you can’t do aren’t worth doing. Don’t mask
self-doubt with contempt.
5.
Leave a decent space of time between writing
something and editing it.
6.
Avoid cliques, gangs, groups. The presence of a
crowd won’t make your writing any better than it is.
7.
Work on a computer that is disconnected from the
internet.
8.
Protect the time and space in which you write.
Keep everybody away from it, even the people who are most important to you.
9.
Don’t confuse honours with achievement.
10. Tell the truth
through whichever veil comes to hand — but tell it. Resign yourself to the
lifelong sadness that comes from never being satisfied.
Neil Gaiman
1.
Write
2.
Put one word after another. Find the right word,
put it down.
3.
Finish what you’re writing. Whatever you have to
do to finish it, finish it.
4.
Put it aside. Read it pretending you’ve never
read it before. Show it to friends whose opinion you respect and who like the
kind of thing that this is.
5.
Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong
or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you
exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always
wrong.
6.
Fix it. Remember that, sooner or later, before
it ever reaches perfection, you will have to let it go and move on and start to
write the next thing. Perfection is like chasing the horizon. Keep moving.
7.
Laugh at your own jokes.
8.
The main rule of writing is that if you do it
with enough assurance and confidence, you’re allowed to do whatever you like.
(That may be a rule for life as well as for writing. But it’s definitely true
for writing.) So write your story as it needs to be written. Write it honestly,
and tell it as best you can. I’m not sure that there are any other rules. Not
ones that matter.
Kurt Vonnegut- 8 Short Story Rules
1.
Use the time of a total stranger in such a way
that he or she will not feel the time was wasted.
2.
Give the reader at least one character he or she
can root for.
3.
Every character should want something, even if
it is only a glass of water.
4.
Every sentence must do one of two things —
reveal character or advance the action.
5.
Start as close to the end as possible.
6.
Be a Sadist. No matter how sweet and innocent
your leading characters, make awful things happen to them-in order that the
reader may see what they are made of.
7.
Write to please just one person. If you open a
window and make love to the world, so to speak, your story will get pneumonia.
8.
Give your readers as much information as
possible as soon as possible. To hell with suspense. Readers should have such
complete understanding of what is going on, where and why, that they could
finish the story themselves, should cockroaches eat the last few pages.
Henry Miller’s
10 Commandments
1.
Work on one thing at a time until finished.
2.
Start no more new books, add no more new
material to ‘Black Spring.’
3.
Don’t be nervous. Work calmly, joyously,
recklessly on whatever is in hand.
4.
Work according to Program and not according to
mood. Stop at the appointed time!
5.
When you can’t create you can work.
6.
Cement a little every day, rather than add new
fertilizers.
7.
Keep human! See people, go places, drink if you
feel like it.
8.
Don’t be a draught-horse! Work with pleasure
only.
9.
Discard the Program when you feel like it—but go
back to it next day. Concentrate. Narrow
down. Exclude.
10. Forget the
books you want to write. Think only of the book you are writing.
11. Write first and
always. Painting, music, friends, cinema, all these come afterwards.
John Steinbeck’s 6 Tips on Writing
1.
Abandon the idea that you are ever going to
finish. Lose track of the 400 pages and write just one page for each day, it
helps. Then when it gets finished, you are always surprised.
2.
Write freely and as rapidly as possible and
throw the whole thing on paper. Never correct or rewrite until the whole thing
is down. Rewrite in process is usually found to be an excuse for not going on.
It also interferes with flow and rhythm which can only come from a kind of
unconscious association with the material.
3.
Forget your generalized audience. In the first
place, the nameless, faceless audience will scare you to death and in the
second place, unlike the theater, it doesn’t exist. In writing, your audience
is one single reader. I have found that sometimes it helps to pick out one
person—a real person you know, or an imagined person and write to that one.
4.
If a scene or a section gets the better of you
and you still think you want it—bypass it and go on. When you have finished the
whole you can come back to it and then you may find that the reason it gave
trouble is because it didn’t belong there.
5.
Beware of a scene that becomes too dear to you,
dearer than the rest. It will usually be found that it is out of drawing.
6.
If you are using dialogue—say it aloud as you write
it. Only then will it have the sound of speech.
1 comment:
Great summary. I love Elmore Leonard's "leave out all the stuff readers skim." You gotta love him.
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